These are my first sketches of the family that runs the travelling circus! I have yet to name them but it goes in the order of: the main character (the daughter to the ringmaster) , the ringmaster (father), the sister (one of the trapeze artists, very invested in the circus), and the mother (runs the circus from behind the scenes, used to be a star back in a famous French circus until she started her own show.) Criticism is welcomed and wanted!
Interesting choices! Perhaps the Opera singer wants to put on a massive show with fireworks etc but unfortunately the circus in town have a show on the same night! And people prefer the circus show instead... Maybe something disastrous happens with the fireworks and burns down the circus tent! Just a thought, you probably have a completely different approach on it already!haha :D
ReplyDeleteAn opera singer (perhaps very young with ambition) dreams of joining a travelling circus but in her backstory maybe she had an accident involving fireworks that damages her vocally and physically and the story is about not giving up on your dreams even if you are disabled don't let it hold you back. Could make a good log line???
ReplyDeleteThat's really cool! I'll think about this as a good conflict to introduce!
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